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569 words today, and my villian is officially a slimebag. He kidnapped a coworker's wife and daughter, and I couldn't get over my anger while I was writing the scene. One of the themes of this WIP is betrayal, but this scene just made me pissed. I think it's because the wife trusted him, and had every reason to. And he went and betrayed her. I think I was having one of those "No! Don't go into the cabin! You don't know what's in there!" reader kind of reactions. Whatever it, that scene just made me furious. Hopefully, it'll have that same effect on readers.

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